not bad, seems like you need to clean your lines, coloring's not bad, but still could use more clean up, but hey, really improving there. also seems like you might want to invest on a scanner ( I think ) but not bad. eventually you will get there. also might also get into other mediums too. only thing I could say it take Life art classes ( I know I will again if I get free time )and you got to start inking your drawings, it will nicer. you might also want to invest on a tablet and some paint program, paint art sai is free. or if you have funds, ( if you want ) photoshop or painter, or whatever. just be open to new things right? well, anywyay, take care.